Monday, June 24, 2013

TWO LOVERS IN LOVE




Two lovers in love
laughed at the sea,
laughed as the waves splashed the shore.
The water was cold
and it tickled their toes
and they laughed
and sang la la la laa.

Two lovers in love
loved though as one, and
laughed as the waves splashed the shore.
The water was warm
and it licked at their toes
and they laughed
and sang la la la laa.

Two lovers in love
labored as one, and
laughed as the waves splashed the shore.
The waters burst last
and fell to the floor.
They laughed at the shore,
three laughed, and then four
and they laughed
and sang la la la laa.




24 comments:

  1. I remember laughing a lot while courting Mrs. C. although for the life of me I can't remember what we we laughing at.

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  2. Love this, my friend! You have quite the poetic talent. There is so much wonderful laughter in the sweetness of love~

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    1. Laughter heals and brings people together.

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  3. They have doubled three stanzas. It must be something in the water. Perhaps they should stand ON the shore away from the water.

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    1. They're in big trouble and they don't know it yet.

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  4. Awesome and I love the picture.

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  5. This is what laughing and tickled toes gets. Good poem.

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  6. La la la laa. Yep, that's pretty much how it works! ;)

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  7. Nice. I love writing songs, but I've never written a poem I'm happy with :(

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    1. I almost always see lyrics as poetry.

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  8. Ah! New love and laughing! I can still remember those days. ;)

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  9. There is nothing like laughing with someone you are falling in love with. Oh so wonderful :)

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