tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post2284671184162343027..comments2024-03-21T11:50:29.630-04:00Comments on Janie Junebug Righting & Editing: I DON'T KNOW IF THIS POEM IS FINISHEDJanie Junebughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-79080746977919533502013-09-04T20:40:07.681-04:002013-09-04T20:40:07.681-04:00Bloody great piece of writingBloody great piece of writingJo-Anne's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418152399382818709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-53766305116457303862013-09-04T17:11:30.536-04:002013-09-04T17:11:30.536-04:00Every time you smack a bug, shout I AM POWER. You&...Every time you smack a bug, shout I AM POWER. You'll feel so good and fascinate the neighbors at the same time.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-51117407863335024052013-09-04T15:44:31.168-04:002013-09-04T15:44:31.168-04:00I say this to the bugs that get into my porch. ;)...I say this to the bugs that get into my porch. ;)Ritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02043285884495492598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-17710084389510913552013-09-04T13:52:35.961-04:002013-09-04T13:52:35.961-04:00You never have to worry with me. You're too fa...You never have to worry with me. You're too far away for my back to tolerate the drive in the car.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-61715779319244737452013-09-04T13:49:29.798-04:002013-09-04T13:49:29.798-04:00I'm not much of a kick ass.I'm not much of a kick ass.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-57411621449509597962013-09-04T12:45:04.047-04:002013-09-04T12:45:04.047-04:00Good. I was really getting worried!Good. I was really getting worried!Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-86681236762437849412013-09-03T23:19:12.591-04:002013-09-03T23:19:12.591-04:00I leave for a while and you turn into a kick-ass m...I leave for a while and you turn into a kick-ass mama. Remind me to show you how to kill using only one finger.lotta joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742978845913126675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-71412109697705989982013-09-03T21:26:05.223-04:002013-09-03T21:26:05.223-04:00Succinct as always, John.Succinct as always, John.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-56160371727685939532013-09-03T18:20:28.964-04:002013-09-03T18:20:28.964-04:00Oohhhh errrrrrrrrrrOohhhh errrrrrrrrrrJohn Going Gentlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14958171262765033946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-82299668462523678672013-09-03T17:50:15.842-04:002013-09-03T17:50:15.842-04:00Not yet.Not yet.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-3175850299359434062013-09-03T17:49:55.705-04:002013-09-03T17:49:55.705-04:00You're safe.You're safe.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-52673704960760846172013-09-03T17:49:40.577-04:002013-09-03T17:49:40.577-04:00Franklin is sitting next to me with his head on my...Franklin is sitting next to me with his head on my leg.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-76795489925199693082013-09-03T17:48:14.215-04:002013-09-03T17:48:14.215-04:00Thank you, Sophie!Thank you, Sophie!Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-83575714881193229612013-09-03T17:47:43.382-04:002013-09-03T17:47:43.382-04:00I appreciate a concrete constructive criticism. I ...I appreciate a concrete constructive criticism. I see your point. Power doesn't quite work.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-55518164574443784242013-09-03T17:47:00.869-04:002013-09-03T17:47:00.869-04:00It's okay, Debbie.It's okay, Debbie. Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-41257278410723488272013-09-03T15:00:35.658-04:002013-09-03T15:00:35.658-04:00Oooooh! Scary!Oooooh! Scary!Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-77468340391154272382013-09-03T12:59:28.899-04:002013-09-03T12:59:28.899-04:00I came here to thank you for your words for Soldie...I came here to thank you for your words for Soldier, thank you for caring, dear Janie. <br /><br />After reading the poem, I think maybe you should go pet Franklin for a while. Ingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02924736131382149056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-90371297065988431692013-09-03T12:01:27.149-04:002013-09-03T12:01:27.149-04:00Sho nuff is ~~ get outta dare!!Sho nuff is ~~ get outta dare!!fromsophiesviewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16532257840856313054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-18280792417394975612013-09-03T11:30:47.692-04:002013-09-03T11:30:47.692-04:00I had a feeling you were talking to an insect. Sti...I had a feeling you were talking to an insect. Still very well done!The Silver Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730805376957629641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-88349269242841666972013-09-03T11:07:20.427-04:002013-09-03T11:07:20.427-04:00Dear Janie, the poem is forceful and relenting. Bo...Dear Janie, the poem is forceful and relenting. Both good. But somehow at the end I felt a little let down. I'm thinking that "Power" is such an abstraction. I'd like a more concrete, tangible word--or phrase or line--here. Just a thought. Peace.Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00612299013780771262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-72758828006901227292013-09-03T10:56:28.126-04:002013-09-03T10:56:28.126-04:00wow...I'm kinda sca sca scared!wow...I'm kinda sca sca scared!Coffee Ladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08342804149071313329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-11648485761029211092013-09-03T10:53:01.570-04:002013-09-03T10:53:01.570-04:00I just hope I haven't ever done anything to an...I just hope I haven't ever done anything to anger you.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-59360028498264600922013-09-03T05:14:13.278-04:002013-09-03T05:14:13.278-04:00I might add something about a can of whoop ass.I might add something about a can of whoop ass.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-89754111100176208032013-09-03T05:13:36.986-04:002013-09-03T05:13:36.986-04:00Thanks, Susie.Thanks, Susie.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4501852053743373610.post-46742734092215915652013-09-03T05:13:21.997-04:002013-09-03T05:13:21.997-04:00I only kill bugs and lizards that invade my home. ...I only kill bugs and lizards that invade my home. A fishducky is safe.Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.com